Writing Update

Been a bit quiet for a while, with no new stories to bring you. This is because when I embarked on finishing off the final story of the Aiella sequence, I realised it was all wrong. In that story, which I started writing nearly two years ago now, the first thing that happens is that Aiella gets a bit … killed.

Yes, I know, killing off your MC is such a bright idea 🙂 The only excuse I can offer is that I was in a very bad mood at the time. Anyway, I wrote more of this post-Aiella story, introducing new characters, and I was working towards finishing it recently when it suddenly occurred to me that it wouldn’t do.

This was mainly because my Muse objected most strenuously to Aiella’s death, and a writer who does not listen to their Muse is a fool. (I might add that everybody who has ever read it objected, too, so she was definitely in the majority).  I ploughed on for a bit, anyway, not wanting to waste the effort expended (a classic case of sunk cost fallacy, or, I was in blood stepp’d in so far that, should I wade no more, returning were as tedious as go o’er).

But as I ploughed on I got to thinking what would the story look like if Aiella lived? And it didn’t take long before I realised that it would, in fact, look a lot better. So I slammed on the brakes and started again … I’ve been able to recycle quite a lot of the dead version, one way or another (and it’s remarkable how the same dialogue can completely change in meaning in another context), but there has inevitably been a lot of new writing needed, especially as I have now gone past the point the old story had got to. (Sort of. It’s complicated).

So I’ve been mostly doing that. It’ll be a while before the finished story appears, as there is a lot to write yet … and then after that I need to carry on, and begin a new cycle. But that is, literally, another story 🙂

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Update

I still aten’t dead 🙂

Currently engaged in writing the conclusion to the Lady Aiella saga … some readers may recall an earlier iteration of this in which the lady was taken a bit dead. To say this was not popular is an understatement … nobody liked the idea, and the only excuse I can offer is that I was in a very bad mood at the time.

I have been persuaded by my Muse to write it again – only now the assassin misses her target, Aiella lives, and the subsequent events are very different – and a much better story. The previous work isn’t entirely wasted, I can recycle parts of it into the new story – quite fun, reconfiguring situations and dialogue into a new context.

The old story was approaching 30k words when abandoned .. but I think this one will be even longer!